Critical Reflection Beta:
So when I started to articulate my thoughts on my classmates Beta’s, I couldn’t help but think how great some of these DA are. I tried to do my best in giving some critical analysis but also being nice as well. I tried to find a crossroads between the two so the students would be able to take the comments as helpful feedback. With that being said, the entire beta comments I made I didn’t have critic that much. All of the betas were really strong and showed great evolution from their past comments.
When I looked at my comments for my feedback I was really surprised of the positive reaction I got for my beta. All of comments were critically structured but most if all gave me an opportunity to see what I can do to improve in the areas for my final DA. After breaking down the comments that were made about my Beta DA I found that everyone had a similar area I could improve on. I didn’t state or show any forms that Id actually gone out and done these improvements. Knowing this I should of put links to the website and other places I’ve conducted my DA too help the students and tutor understand.
After reviewing my comments from my fellow classmates and tutor, Ill take their advice on board and look to examine areas I can improve on with my DA. I have mentioned that id be looking at the financial, social impacts of my DA Sonar Reality. However as mentioned by Nick Montague it would important to clarify the negative affects f the technology I’ve researched and what would happen if the technology didn’t work for the occupant leaving them helpless. Also Nick asked too maybe zero in on specific time period, instead of a ruff estimate.
I also looked into the provided research done by my classmates for me. They all suggested great areas too look into and more importantly providing links as well. Nick Montague suggested a link for to look into that mentions how sonar glasses could replace sight canes. Nothando and Mary also gave great feedback, highlitghting i should look into similar areas as well.
Critical Review of Students Beta:
Georgie’s beta was very well constructed and presented. She referenced all her iterations made about the DA. The DA was a very interesting and intriguing topic. I tried giving Georgie feedback around trying to find more information from other sites such as reddit too help her with the research. I suggested a link article that exclaims how social media will influence business in the future.
Emily’s Beta was great as well. She formatted and highlighted areas of research plus development from past comments. Her DA was very interesting, using black mirror as way o predicting future technologies and if it would become a reality. I tried giving feedback to Emily in improving her podcast and other outlets of media. I suggest a live podcast that speaks about black mirror as well.
Oliver’s beta presentation was amazing. I could see how much time and effort went into the DA and beta It was great to see the inclusion of commerce and business strategies. For feedback for oliver it was more making sure her product doesn’t get claim for copyright, so I suggested a cards rules page for her to maybe articulate her outstanding more.